I'd like to thank my daughter's third grade teacher for doing a poetry writing cycle with A! A is more successful with poetry because the pieces are shorter and mechanics break all rules. She enjoys playing with words in a simplier format. She is also more successful with poetry because she can write about her memories and emotions as she did here. This event happened four and a half years ago when she was five, what a memory!
Golf Cart
Falling out!
Not a pretty sight.
Falling out!
Not a pretty sight.
Ouch!
Cars stopped.
Ouch!
Cars stopped.
My dad ran out of the cart.
I felt scared and sad.
My dad ran out of the cart.
I felt scared and sad.
I got the blues. Wouldn't you?
I got the blues. Wouldn't you?
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