The short bursts of thoughts/words were very effective for telling this slice.
The early drive is so peaceful and it is so much fun to get there before evening. Sounds fun.
The writing here may not be long, but you packed in such a lot! The quite boring, quick start, full day--all ended with slow time with the pool and sun.
So glad you got there safely and the trip went well. Enjoy!!
I am guessing you are in Florida or at least some place warm and lovely today!
Sounds divine! Enjoy.
Oh, it sounds wonderful! I love the short, quick sentences. I'm going to share this poem with my students. Have fun and enjoy the sunshine.